this is my third draft series photos. i try to add geometric shapes and people in each photo. in a couple of photos i used shadows as my geometric shapes. i also worked on timing to make each photo more lively.
Overall, great job. I really like the second one down from the top because the big and long shadow really pops out in the picture and I think you timed all of these very well. My only suggestion is that try to have more of a variety of pictures- you have two pictures and the only difference is where one of the people is facing, so I think you should have used another picture. But other than that nice work.
Awesome job. I can see the defined shapes and lines very easily and your photos are succeeding in becoming more lively. I also am really liking the perspective in which you take these photos (especially the leading lines and shadows). I think your third and fourth photos were less successful because the objects were so large. It may have been more successful if you had more of the photo in focus (yet that is tricky to accomplish). Again, great set.
I really like the shapes and use of the scenery to frame the subjects. Again the use of timing is really impressive, and I think these came together really well.
Strong set. The use of leading lines, depth staging, and geometric shapes are all integrated in this set and are extremely effective. The lighting is good too. The one with the kids is not quite as effective since they seem to be a distraction.
This is a really well done series so far. The first photo is really well done, although I feel you should try and keep a flat edge to the photo, instead of having the bit of another trash can there. Other than that, you're doing really well.
This set is really strong, and I see improvements from your last two. The shapes with the shadows worked out pretty well in my opinion.
ReplyDeleteOverall, great job. I really like the second one down from the top because the big and long shadow really pops out in the picture and I think you timed all of these very well. My only suggestion is that try to have more of a variety of pictures- you have two pictures and the only difference is where one of the people is facing, so I think you should have used another picture. But other than that nice work.
ReplyDeleteAwesome job. I can see the defined shapes and lines very easily and your photos are succeeding in becoming more lively. I also am really liking the perspective in which you take these photos (especially the leading lines and shadows). I think your third and fourth photos were less successful because the objects were so large. It may have been more successful if you had more of the photo in focus (yet that is tricky to accomplish). Again, great set.
ReplyDeleteI really like the shapes and use of the scenery to frame the subjects. Again the use of timing is really impressive, and I think these came together really well.
ReplyDeleteStrong set. The use of leading lines, depth staging, and geometric shapes are all integrated in this set and are extremely effective. The lighting is good too. The one with the kids is not quite as effective since they seem to be a distraction.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really well done series so far. The first photo is really well done, although I feel you should try and keep a flat edge to the photo, instead of having the bit of another trash can there. Other than that, you're doing really well.
ReplyDeleteGreat series. I really like the picture with the boys it looks so natural and not posed. Its really geometrical. Nice job
ReplyDeletegood series i like all of your photos. i dont think this series is as cohesive as your last one. im looking forward to what you will post next.
ReplyDeleteThis series is awesome. The series feels very realistic and also involved for the viewer. The shapes and shadows are amazing, keep up the good work!
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